Kia Ora,
This week for writing we wrote about Umbrella. Our learning goal is to use a range of written features to engage the audience, use simple and compound sentences with a variety of beginnings, lengths and structures, use some complex sentences to create pace, flow and interest & ensure that most writing is grammatically correct.
Umbrella is a short movie clip about empathy, empathy is about putting your self in some one else's shoes and understanding what they are feeling.
Umbrella is about a little girl and her mother going to an orphanage and giving them toys but then her Umbrella goes missing so she goes up stairs and sees a little boy the reason the little boy called Boris took the Umbrella was because his dad had a yellow Umbrella so the little girl gives the umbrella to Boris.
Here is my writing
When is a time when you showed empathy?
Kia Ora Georgia,
ReplyDeleteI love the way you have talked about the yellow Umbrella.
Maybe next time you could use a different colour Title.
I also love the way you have included the goal for this week.
Keep Up the Good Work.
Francesca.